Killing some darlings
Have to do some cuts to shorten chapter 6 and move it along faster. I do have some stuff that I actually like the writing for on the chopping block. Oh well.
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Side note, the part where Leo's thinking is kind of intentionally supposed to sound like Goofy, given the absurdity of the thought. Leo is not supposed to sound like Alec Guinness in his first speaking line there, but it ended up a little like Obi-Wan's "You know you can't win, Darth."
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Side note, the part where Leo's thinking is kind of intentionally supposed to sound like Goofy, given the absurdity of the thought. Leo is not supposed to sound like Alec Guinness in his first speaking line there, but it ended up a little like Obi-Wan's "You know you can't win, Darth."