Project Silver chapter 1, draft 2
Aug. 4th, 2015 10:16 amAlmost done with this chapter, and I think it'll be the version I'll go with. Everything's starting to flow well.
Just have to figure out one thing, though--this fic, in some way, takes place across multiple timelines. There's bits I left a little open from "Kings and Vagabonds," and I'm still working out how frequently I want to revisit those bits. I won't be able to fit them all into chapter one, so I'm not quite sure when I should revisit certain bits, namely the hints I dropped that 40 years in the future, DenLiner had to ensure that everyone and everything was in the right place and time to save Eiji's life.
Just have to figure out one thing, though--this fic, in some way, takes place across multiple timelines. There's bits I left a little open from "Kings and Vagabonds," and I'm still working out how frequently I want to revisit those bits. I won't be able to fit them all into chapter one, so I'm not quite sure when I should revisit certain bits, namely the hints I dropped that 40 years in the future, DenLiner had to ensure that everyone and everything was in the right place and time to save Eiji's life.