Writing

I hate it when I have an idea of how these three particular events should be formatted within the story, lining up as a triple cliffhanger to maintain tension until the next chapter...and I can't figure out how to break up the flow of my scenes to get them to break down that way.

Also it would help if my scenes would fill themselves out. I'm probably okay on Shoko's, since I don't have to show her actually winning this fight, but Eiji and Ankh are once again being a pain in the ass.